Investigation​

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My introductory paragraph is very detailed and talks greatly about my client and what I will be doing. It explains in going in depth what the separate things that need to be done in the investigation stage should be and how I am going to be doing them. I think that what I have written on what I am doing is highly in depth although I could have written more in depth on why we are doing this and the types of way I will be researching. In the section were I brainstorm potential problems to be solved I have many really good ideas but I really think that I could have expanded more on this area I didn’t focus on this area as much as I should have on going in more depth.

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I really enjoy how I explained my problem in depth and expanded on it, as well as choosing my client and explaining why. I really like how I explained why my problem is important and how it is relevant as well as socially important. I brainstormed many well possible solutions for my problems although I think that I could have evaluated them far better. Coming up with the questions for my client was challenging because I had to first list what was important and what I had to find out, I find that I created very good questions that helped me get straight to the point and in detail get more than enough detailed information to help me out. I agree completely with my choice of product because after long hours of research on different types of shelters and how shelters benefit us I think I produced a well-written piece in depth. I could have improved a whole lot on my case study I think that time had management had a little bit to do with why I couldn’t produce as in depth writing as I would like to have had. It really doesn’t do justice to my research, I could have improved on actually including my research in my investigation showing pictures I found and writings I read but I didn’t not include it. I should have included more ideas for my own product and I would like to improve this for the next investigation I complete.

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I really like how I wrote about how each material was used, provided a picture and really gave a lot of the materials and tools I was going to use. It is really detailed and has great ideas. My design was written clearly but I would have liked to have expanded just a little more talking about my client. My specifications list is quite detailed and has a great amount of specifications but I should have talked about them in more detail and have written more about them. Overall I thought that my investigation stage was fairly good there were some key points that should have been improved that I will be focusing on to improve during the investigation stage in the next unit.